noir tests

Hey hey, I've got a new noir comic coming out, and I've been doing some tests! Check these inking samples out.

This is just ink and brush. It's not bad. I like the stark contrast.

This is ballpoint pen and wash. It's a little to grey for me.

This is brush and ink with ballpoint pen. I really like the little details plus the high contrast. I really like that scratchy sketchy feel. 

Also, I did this logo for a group I'm working with, Digital Bad Boy Studios:

I think it came out really nice! Very square and angular. I'm going to be doing some cool variations on it soon too.

Noir comics

Oh hey! Y'know that comic I've been working on for a week? Finally finished it! This has been a long time coming honesty; I love noir, I make comics, why haven't I done this sooner?

I'm fairly happy with it overall. The comic is silly, but It's a nice little story. I need to work on the characters more, and the shading. I think my favorite panel is panel 3. In the future, all panels will be of beautiful women's lips and nothing else.

What do you guys think of the style and characters?